Introduction: clarity?
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Introduction: organization/flow?
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Introduction: right amount of detail?
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Introduction: other comments?
Bonus question: Our National Monuments will include 12 panoramic images on double page spreads as the opening page for each state. Should I include additional double spread images at the expense of the total number of different images?